Tuesday, 23 January 2007

hmmm

Heyyyyyy!



hey there. Today has been your average tuesday. dull.

was meant to be doing a drama thingy after school, our whole class was revising for the prelim on thursday. And Mr Young, HEAD OF DRAMA, decides to bog off home instead. So we were stuck at school til 4 until we realised he was gone. grrrrr

anyway, back to the point. I wrote another wee poem recently. This one is cheerier than the last one, I think.


eyes
in your eyes
in your eyes
endless circles of rainbow light
a sparkle of hope
deep, dreaming, midnight.

Shining starlight above you
breaks through, lights up
soft, gentle, pure.
a shimmering, bright smile
brings me joy and hope, and love
and even yet, makes the stars envy
at the beauty and the wonder
of you, so perfectly created.

I am complete
I am happy
little thoughts of the stars
drift through, fly through
eyes, wonderous
enchanting my mind
dance dance dance
your eyes dance with laughter, in the starlight
as you dance, in the spotlight

sweet surprises
will leave when you leave
and I imagine you are here
and all I can do is smile
because you are who you are.


(c) hannah jane charlotte mcmillan

3 comments:

Cole-OhMyWow. said...

Boo!
This is fun then isnt it?!
=]]
Keep up the great work smelly
Love, Nicole - Xx.

IAIN CUNNINGHAM said...

I like the poem. :-)

Paper Dreams, Honey. said...

Thank you. It is one of my better ones, I must say. A little cheerier than the other one I posted.

I prefer the stuff I write about people I love.Like this one. I find they are the most real. :)

I did like your performance at assembly today. It made me :):):)

hx